SWORD & FIRE PROLOGUE

V O L . ID Y N A S T Y

AXEL CREED

“Now and then.

The friction between time present and past. The ambition of a legacy envisioned flush against the weight of a dynasty inherited. At this cogent juncture, the destinies of men are oft defined.

At the end of the Age of Peace, this was such a moment.”

(Seer Tomrin, the TrueHeart)

  • Below you’ll find the Prologue of Sword & Fire in its entirety. This is the penultimate version, as I may make final edits based on feedback from the book’s reading group. Consecutive chapters of Sword & Fire, Dynasty, Vol. I will be released every 2-3 weeks. Members of the reading group can download the PDF version.

    DISCLAIMER

    Sword & Fire is written with a mature audience in mind. If I was doing the age rating thing, I’d label it MA15+.

  • This is the story of four warring kingdoms wholly ignorant of the imminent invasion of a savage horde and the disparate band of outcasts who seek to shield their world from destruction.

    The four kingdoms of Pangaia juggle a friable amity. The belligerent King of the Eastgate plots to subjugate all under his iron-fisted rule. When the quinquennial Peace Celebration descends into a farce, the Eastgate’s King pounces. Manipulating the West to war on the South, he sets his own eyes on overthrowing the wealthy Northgate. As bitter war looms, treachery takes one and all in its teratoid tentacles. While monarchs scheme and rage, devious seers and twisted priests serve only to stoke the blistering madness into full flame. Yet, shrouded in the dark shadow cast by a century-long enmity and a religion that leaves no place for magic and wonder, Pangaia remains blind to the bestial horde mustering on uncharted realms with one thing in mind: slaughter.

    In a vast primordial land in which the ancient tales speak of giants and magic, and of great fire-spitting beasts, can a disparate band of those forgotten and outcast awaken the primeval magic and redeem a world scarred and shaken? What can a young crookback, an escaped prisoner, a crippled prince, a wizened sage and a mysterious elderly woman possibly do to shield Pangaia from the imminent onslaught of sword and fire?

  • VOLUME I : DYNASTY

    The Darkness of Rasi Laua:
    Prologue ~ Hector

    The Farce of the Peace Table:
    Chapter 1 ~ Tomrin

    The Farce of the Peace Table:
    Chapter 2 ~ Tomrin

    The Drooks of the Eastgate:
    Chapter 3 ~ Zakoriah

    The Sovereign of the Southgate:
    Chapter 4 ~ Dronan

    The Freedmen of Liberty Rock:
    Chapter 5 ~ Jed

    The Moltanis of the Westgate:
    Chapter 6 ~ Sigi

    The Drooks of the Eastgate:
    Chapter 7 ~ Zakoriah

    The Sovereign of the Southgate:
    Chapter 8 ~ Drislow

    The Freedmen of Liberty Rock:
    Chapter 9 ~ Jed

    The Clans of the Winter Mountains:
    Chapter 10 ~ Raven

    The Moltanis of the Westgate:
    Chapter 11 ~ Sigi

    The Seers of the Duneedin Valley:
    Chapter 12 ~ Tomrin

    The Clans of the Winter Mountains:
    Chapter 13 ~ Raven

    The Freedmen of Liberty Rock:
    Chapter 14 ~ Jed

    The Drooks of the Eastgate:
    Chapter 15 ~ Zakoriah

    The Seers of the Duneedin Valley:
    Chapter 16 ~ Sopreno

    The Moltanis of the Westgate:
    Chapter 17 ~ Sigi

    The Sovereign of the Southgate:
    Chapter 18 ~ Dronan

    The Vaspasiums of the Northgate:
    Chapter 19 ~ Mandi

    The Seers of the Duneedin Valley:
    Chapter 20 ~ Sopreno

    The Darkness of Rasi Laua:
    Chapter 21 ~ Hector

  • THE FOUR CLADES OF PANGAIA

    EASTGATE: CLADE DROOK

    Garin Drook, King of the Eastgate, son of the late Ramogiah, now fifty-and-nine;

    his first wife, the late Romelan, bore him five children:

    Tamlyn, his first born, a daughter, now deceased;
    Rex, his firstborn son, heir to his throne, born an hour before his identical twin, now twenty-and-eight;
    Jed, his second son, born an hour after his identical twin, now twenty-and-eight;
    Sigi, his second daughter, married to Samteloni Moltani, King of the Westgate, now twenty-and-two;
    Zakoriah, his third born son, now twenty years of age;

    his second wife, Sentrix, bore him three children:

    Mandi, his third daughter, now ten-and-seven;
    Penti, his fourth daughter, now ten-and-two;
    Konin, his fourth son, now ten years of age.

    WESTGATE: CLADE MOLTANI

    Samteloni Moltani, King of the Westgate, son of the late Darmeloni and the Queen Dowager Ciznaki, now twenty-and-eight;

    his wife, Sigi, has yet to conceive;
    his heir, Benjamin, his only sibling, now twenty-and-four.

    SOUTHGATE: CLADE ZORDUKA

    Drislow Zorduka, Sovereign of the Southgate, daughter of the late Dzekorg and Valrislow, now thirty-and-four;

    her siblings, Gregor, Natasha, Stephan and Melissa are all deceased;
    she married her four Generals: Brutola, Horacett, Kreklar, Dronan;
    she is without an heir.

    NORTHGATE: CLADE VASPASIUM

    Carlo III Vaspasium, King of the Northgate, son of the late Carlo II, now sixty-and-two;

    his wife, Yancil, bore him four children:

    Carlo IV, his firstborn son, heir to his throne, now thirty-and-five;
    Wendy, his first daughter, now twenty-and-eight;
    Muriel, his second daughter, now twenty-and-five;
    Dan, his second son, now twenty years of age.

    THE SEERS OF DUNEEDIN

    The Seven Seers from oldest to youngest:

    Grentzol, Sopreno, Roldin, Normand, Magnus, Josefin and Langhan.

    THE CLANS OF THE WINTER MOUNTAINS

    The Northron Clans

    Krato Twoface and his counsel of men, from oldest to youngest:

    Fletchson WindWolf, Tridox HammerHand, Dalwin CaveDweller and Shazor ‘The Red Sword’ ThunderHeart

    The Southron Clans

    Saldon of the Crag Crows and his daughter, Raven, accompanied by their counsel: RikClaw and Talon.

    ScarFace of the Stone Heads, and his brother GruelFace and his champion DreadFist.

    THE HERETICS ON LIBERTY ROCK

    The Elders of the Island in no particular order: Slade, Root, Hunter, Gamorah, Wilfred, Marigold and Jonas.

    The escapee Trout and the mysterious Striker.

     

The Darkness of Rasi Laua

PROLOGUEHECTOR

Sword & Fire, Prologue: Hector

A tortured scream shook the heavens.

Hungry flames licked the last remains of the legendary stronghold that had housed the Shneyti’s rulers for thousands of years. The ravenous blaze provided the only light, as the cries of the tortured and dying reverberated in the freezing night air. A moonless sky looked on, eerily devoid of stars. It seemed that even the heavenly bodies were ashamed, and Hector joined them in wishing he could hide from the madness.

The rank stench of terror and death wrought by sword and fire clawed at his nostrils. Hector rubbed his nose and his burning eyes. Clouds of acrid smoke rose from the torched dwellings of the vanquished, casting a ghoulish shadow over this once proud and ancient tribe. According to the tales, the People of the Frozen Tundra, or Shneyti in the Common Tongue, had walked the land since antiquity, but they would do so no more.

Hector’s mouth curled down in a snarl of disgust. Along with the warrior horde that had secured this notable victory, he was now expected to stand aside and allow the Priests of the Overlord to perform their gory task. With a lust for blood, the depraved holy men scoured through the remnants of the last battle—the Shneyti’s brave but futile stand. Performing their cruel act on the foe’s wounded and their terrified women and children, for none were spared, the Priests then dispensed the same treatment to the fallen: impalement followed by disembowelling.

“Zlatan demands judgement on his foemen,” the Overlord of the Zhuns had often intoned, speaking in the third person as was his habit. “To prevent Zlatan’s foemen from re-entering the cycle of rebirth, his soul must be speared first and afterwards, eviscerated. Likewise, his females and his offspring. Only then will he be forever banished, damned to the endless salt fires of torment. Never to return to defile the land.”

Hector dropped his eyes. A demented ritual, he grimaced. A deranged rite.

The priests swarmed over their victims like flies over a carcass. In their hundreds, garbed in black robes soiled with the red of the slain. Their faces twisted in bedevilled glee illuminated only by dancing firelight—swollen red eyes against albino skin, gnashing yellow teeth in wide split mouths. Giddy, ecstatic shrieks of perverse delight made mockery of the desecrated.

Hector shivered. He would never grow accustomed to such depravity. This post-battle cleansing was too much to bear. War was one thing; this was something else entirely. The Shneyti fought bravely. They do not deserve this. His knuckles tightened around the hilt of his blade. Not the females and the young. Hector swallowed his disgust. Resisting the urge to turn his weapon on the priests, he sheathed it instead.

He turned to watch his fellow warriors. Grim-faced, their bronze bodies spattered with the blood they’d spilled in conquest, their mislike for the albino priestly class was likewise palpable. For different reasons, mind. Since the Overlord had initiated this heinous cleansing rite, the victorious warriors were denied the spoils of war.

Hector simply wished to flee the insanity. If I could grow wings, I would fly away, he closed his eyes. Far away. To the Southland of the small people … where my flower blossoms and my sweet…

“The Great Master calls for you, Hector,” a youthful voice cut his thoughts short.

Hector opened his eyes and the face of the messenger came into focus. The young warrior’s expression was a tight mask. The mask was typical, for a warrior never betrayed his thoughts or feelings. That his countenance was tight, spoke of something else. There’s no bloodlust in his eyes. He does not revel in the carnage. Do I see disquiet?

“The Great Master will slay the Shneyti King shortly,” the young man explained. “Zlatan demands the presence of the generals and you too.”

Hector felt his jaw tighten before nodding once. He’d been stripped of his rank a long time ago, when his transgression cast a shadow over his reputation, soiling his standing before Zlatan. In these battle conditions, however, the Overlord treated him on par with the generals—a show of trust that was met with widespread discontent. Would that he’d let me be.

“They assemble in the Shneyti King’s hall,” said the messenger.

Hector held his gaze. He sensed something different about the young man. Could he be as I am? he thought to himself. Is he free from the Master’s spell? Waving disdainfully at the butchery around them, Hector scowled and said, “I too do not approve.”

The muscles in the man’s jaw clenched and he cleared his throat. “We do the Master’s bidding.”

Hector put his hand on the younger man’s shoulder. “What is your name?”

The warrior flinched and shook off Hector’s hand, his eyes darting this way and that, anxious that others were watching. “Once Hector the Fearless,” he hissed defensively. “Now, Hector the Disgraced.”

Hector sighed within himself, but tipped his head at the man’s perception of him. Foolish, I am. I’ve exposed him. “I act out of turn,” he said, rueful. “Only remember this. Be true,” he tapped his own chest. “Be true to the voice that speaks in here.”

The young man spat on the ground despite his eyes softening momentarily.

Hector turned and made his way to answer the Overlord’s command. If the young man is free of the Master’s spell, perhaps there is hope for my people yet.

Upon arrival, Hector stepped into the Shneyti king’s hall, and held his breath. It was quiet and well insulated from the chaos outside; its ancient stone walls padded with layers of fur. The air, thick with the scent of pine woodsmoke, immediately caught his nose and offered some relief from the stench outside. Dancing firelight from several braziers made the large chamber almost seem warm and hospitable. Hector exhaled slowly. All twelve generals were present, along with an equal number of warriors, and before them, towering above even the largest, stood Zlatan.

The Overlord’s permanent scowl tightened, registering Hector’s arrival. He sucked in air through his sharpened teeth, relishing the macabre scene of carnage and bloodshed his insatiable lust for glory had procured. His pale-yellow skin glowed and his pulsing red eyes glittered with a pride few men ever tasted. If indeed he was a man. Where warlords and tyrants had failed for millennia, he had now triumphed. Now, Zlatan alone ruled Rasi Laua. He alone was Ruler over all the conquered tribes of The Pride Land. His victory would now confirm the prophecy of old and uphold his claim of divinity.

In truth, Zlatan’s triumph over the last great tribes of Rasi Laua had only been a matter of time once he’d bespelled the terrible fire-breathers. Even Zlatan’s mastery over the lesser beasts that stalked the land had not prepared Hector for what was surely the darkest of black magic. The monstrous flesh-eaters loomed twenty feet in the air when reared on pillar-like hind legs. With a coarse armoured hide impenetrable to man’s swords and spears and arrows; with savage, slashing claws and hooked, razor-sharp fangs as long as a man’s forearm, inferno-hot fire rained from their molten gorges. As if in one with Zlatan’s capricious will, the fire-breathers did what he bade them. Monsters of his cruel imagination, Hector had concluded. Enforcers of his unbridled ambition.

The conquest of the once-mighty Shneyti was over with a swift ruthless that defied sense and reason. Dishonourable, was Hector’s judgment of it. An unfair contest.

The twenty hellish dregos under the Overlord’s charm torched through the Shneyti’s mounted forces as if they were twigs in a raging bonfire, scorching their woolly beasts like brittle garments in a blacksmith’s furnace, melting their great tusks and bones, and the mighty warriors who proudly bestrode them, as easily as candle wax. The infernal heat of the fire-breathers’ wrath seared through the stronghold’s thick walls, fissuring massive gaping cracks. And once cooled, it allowed Zlatan’s warriors to assail the stronghold and torch the Shneyti city.

Zlatan’s rasping timbre broke the stilted silence. “Soon the time will be ripe for Zlatan to cross the Great Spears and conquer Dwan Gona,” he said. “Victory this day portends our future triumph. A Great Cleansing of the South. With the destruction of the halfman, Zlatan will usher in a New Dawn,” he proclaimed in twisted certainty. “Zlatan, the Slayer of Rulers, will crush the maggots infesting that accursed bung heap. Zlatan will purge the land of impure blood and the foul halfman, and shower all the land with his pure-seed. This is Zlatan’s destiny.”

Watching his Ruler and Master, Hector ground his teeth to control the chill that prickled his flesh. Within the next cycle, Zlatan would march his Horde over the great mountain range of the south bent on destroying the small people of the vast Southland. Maggots he calls them. Hector grimaced knowing that his betrayal of the albino giant, started those long years ago, would now reach completion. The line is drawn. The time is coming. I must warn the small folk.

The Overlord scowled at his prey. Before him sat the stoic Shneyti king and his trembling queen, both hunched in their thrones made of wicker and fur. And between the Overlord and his quarry, the Shneyti’s heir, Pollo. Brave he stood. Strong. Tall. His eyes like flint. His knuckles pulsing around the shaft of his battleaxe. He said not a word, but raw defiance framed his comely features. Pollo the LongReach, he was called. The tribe’s finest warrior, his ability with an axe in the Frozen Tundra was renown.

Zlatan almost smirked. “You will die a swift death for your courage, young pup,” he taunted, as he loosed his blades from the leather straps on his back—two cruel five-foot-long scythes that he wielded with blinding speed and terrible ferocity. “You will try to honour your king and sire, but will only serve to confirm his humiliation.” With unblinking eyes, the Overlord beckoned his foe.

The Shneyti heir knew the stakes. Only defeating Zlatan in one-on-one combat would alter his father and mother’s fate. Pollo attacked with great suddenness, like a man who knew he needed gods-luck to prevail. His roar reverberated through the night air, and the firelight licked at his swinging blade.

Hector held his breath, admiration stoking his heart, and for an instant, he joined the heir in hoping for the impossible. Reach long, Pollo. Oh, that your blade would strike true.

Zlatan met the incoming axehead with the scythe held in his right hand. The sheer power behind his parry dislodged the heir’s footing and his vain hope. Sudden fear flashed across the Shneyti warrior’s eyes and before Pollo could recover his balance, Zlatan cleaved the man’s weapon arm at the elbow.

The Shneyti heir screamed in agony and clutched at his maimed appendage.

Quick as a snake, Zlatan dropped his own blades and wrapped his giant hands around Pollo’s throat. Hefting his foe clear into the air, as a rivulet of red showered the man’s dangling feet, Zlatan laughed an empty laugh. “You showed courage, young pup, but you offered no contest.” And with that, he ripped out the man’s windpipe.

A moment’s hush was cut by the Shneyti queen’s cry. When her king held her quiet, only the gurgling, choking sound that emanated from their son’s body met the inrushing stillness.

Hector watched Zlatan drop the body to the floor and lick the blood from his fingers. Brutal. Ruthless. He could only marvel at Zlatan’s great power.

The Overlord sucked on his teeth, leering at the dead man’s mother. The stricken woman lay traumatised in the arms of her king. Her jaw slack with shock, her eyes waxen with terror.

It’s not over yet, Hector shook his head.

“Come,” Zlatan clapped his hands together, signalling for his holy men.

The pitiable mother screamed when three priests emerged from the shadows and lifted her son’s mutilated body into the air.

Chosen from amongst the Zhuns because, like their Master, they too were born without pigment in their skin, the priests relished their macabre role. Squeals of delight punctuated the frigid air as they spread the heir’s stiff legs wide before bringing him down onto a flame-hardened stake with savage force. The sickly ripping of flesh and crunching of bone was so unearthly, so gory, even battle-hardened Hector felt his stomach roil.

As Zlatan’s holy men gutted the impaled Shneyti heir, the Master’s eyes remained transfixed on the wretched queen. The woman’s head shook uncontrollably and Hector knew the Overlord was aroused by the grisly spectacle. To his own chagrin, he knew the Warlord and his base appetites well. Too well. Marked by his black-heart, I am, he cursed. Likewise complicit in his list of countless abominations.

“We-we beg for mercy,” the defeated Shneyti King stammered, his voice broken and quavering. The man had slid from his throne under the weight of his queen’s grief. Bowed on one knee, he held his wife and queen, trying in vain to shield her from the Slayer of Rulers looming over them.

Zlatan sneered, his lip curling in menace, revealing his sharp yellow teeth. “Your men fought bravely, Wondupo, and for that, Zlatan will let you die last. But first, Zlatan will purge your female, and you will watch so that your humiliation is complete.”

“O Great Lord,” the Shneyti Ruler pleaded; his face streaked with dirt and tears, his copper skin blanched with dread. “You have slain my army, massacred my people, butchered my children and desecrated my firstborn before my eyes. Please, I beg you for a quick death,” his voice warbled. “Not for me I ask, but for my Queen. Have mercy.”

Zlatan bared his teeth, indignant. “What is mercy but the ramblings of a craven? You dishonour your ancestors with such a cowardly plea. Your people have wielded great power for ages upon ages, now you must be subject to a judgement of greater power. That is the only law of this frozen land. One you should know well,” Zlatan spat the words out. “After this day, there will be no more recollection of your people.”

Licking his lips with a tongue blackened by ink-craft, Zlatan nodded to Vellon, his Chief General. The big broad-shouldered man with an ugly battle-scarred mug stepped forward. Growling in his gravelly voice, he barked out orders from a mouth partially hidden behind a dishevelled thatch of dirty whiskers.

Four warriors jumped into action, delirious with excitement at being called upon. Two grabbed the old King and two the Queen, wrenching them apart from one another.

“Mercy,” cried Wondupo again. “Mercy for my helpmeet.”

“You will taste Zlatan’s judgement,” the Overlord answered in disdain. “You will first watch your helpmeet impaled and gutted alive and then, you will share the same fate.”

Pinning Wondupo to the floor, the warriors forced his head up in expectation of the gory spectacle to come. With strong, cruel hands they stifled his last desperate struggle, bridling his kicking and pleading. Breathless from exertion and terror, the old king could only whimper as the other pair of warriors lifted his shrieking queen into the air as the priests drew near.

Standing next to the Chief General, Vellon, of a rank and status he once held, Hector winced. War, combat, killing was one thing. The law of survival and conquest. Torture and butchery was another beast entirely. Hector had no stomach for it. He closed his eyes and tried to shut out the ear-splitting screams of horror that flayed him. Everything within his own being condemned him. His blood flows in your veins. You are the Overlord’s spawn.

As his whole body shuddered at the truth, he felt his hand tighten around the hilt of his scythe, and not for the first time, he considered cleaving the head from the shoulders of the monster who’d sired him. Although he refused to believe the claims of the Overlord’s immortality, there was sufficient evidence to support the tales. The despotic tyrant’s length of days without aging, his virility and unfailing haleness, his insatiable lust for all things … facts that cajoled even the stubbornly sceptic Hector to cede the man might indeed be a god in human form. A hideous, beastly god.

The only thing that kept him from giving into temptation and testing the veracity of the legend was the flock he protected. Hector the Fearless cared little for his own wellbeing. Death would permit me to escape this madness forever. However, he alone stood shield over the women in his harem. And if he dishonoured himself in blatant treachery, those he offered safe harbour would be shared amongst Zlatan’s senior warriors, to be ravaged and ruined.

His tired eyes searched the dark firmament visible through the smokeshaft in the thatched ceiling, vainly seeking a reprieve from the air now redolent with the sour odour of sweat and horror and despair. He felt a painful breath judder out of his body. Unable to lose himself in the night sky pregnant with snow, Hector swallowed the bitter taste of bile in his mouth, as the Shneyti queen’s agonised screams faded at last. Her king, the once dignified Wondupo, had long since gagged on his own vomit.

Loath to soil the memory of his beloved, not wanting his thoughts to dwell on her in such a setting, Hector couldn’t help himself. She embodied his salvation. Needing to escape, there was only one way to do so. His thoughts coalesced around the image of Adelina that he always kept stored in his memory. Do you thrive, my flower, love of my life? Have the small folk been good to you? To you and our angel?

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  • The Prologue
    • I wrote the Prologue only after I had conceived the four kingdoms, their monarchs and the conflicts that would occupy them. Not only did I need the Prologue to introduce a key character in the story, but I also needed to paint the darkest picture I could possibly conjure: a mustering inhuman threat that would frame the squabbles of the four kingdoms as petty.
    • The Prologue introduces one part of the overarching plot of the book: the imminent destruction of the inhabitants of Pangaia by a bloodthirsty horde. Indeed, Zlatan’s final conquest of Rasi Laua serves as the book’s first “inciting incident,” to quote Robert McKee, precipitating the invasion of Pangaia.

      (Of course, the second part of the plot, flowing out of the first, captures the book’s “dramatic question”: who can possibly stave off this all-damning threat and save Pangaia from certain and total annihilation?)

    • The harrowing true story of Vlad the Impaler makes my skin crawl. I enjoy history, but this is one history lesson I have yet to complete. So, from what I have read of Vlad’s barbarity, I sourced inspiration for Zlatan’s priests and their abominable practices. In a sense, my take on their perverse activities is merely watered-down fiction of a far more grisly chapter in human history.
    • Sword & Fire is ultimately a story about courage, love and faith. Hence, my Prologue is admittedly chancy. I realise I run the risk of losing a potential audience who may well be put off by its goriness. I hope you stick around; that you put up with the darkness knowing a light will surely shine. And hopefully, you found a little humanity in the character of Hector, too.

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5 Comments

  1. Axel Creed
    April 19, 2017 @ 9:39 pm

    Share your thoughts, questions and comments below. I’d love to hear from you.

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  2. Susan
    April 21, 2017 @ 4:50 pm

    At last! I’ve been waiting a while for this. Ever since you first floated the idea.

    Gripping first chapter. Love the choice of language: hitherto, overmuch, mislike, etc. Resonates with a time of yore.

    Will share more in the beta group. So excited 🙂

    Reply

    • Axel Creed
      April 26, 2017 @ 11:06 am

      Nice to have you involved, Susan.

      Reply

  3. TonyMc
    April 26, 2017 @ 10:50 am

    Great start. Really enjoyed that. Heading to the forum now. Thanks for letting me get involved.

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    • Axel Creed
      April 26, 2017 @ 11:06 am

      Pleasure, Tony. Happy to have you!

      Reply

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